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Y1 Unit 10.5: Finalizing Your Full Manuscript

After you finish your second round of revisions based on feedback from the Developmental Editor, the team finalizes your manuscript so that it can be piloted in Year 2 of this project. The information in this section enables each author team to make sure that full manuscripts are ready for peer review and classroom use. Contributing Authors can get their chapters as complete as possible to lighten their Lead Author’s workload.

All chapters are due to Lead Authors 2 weeks before the end of Unit 10.

Chapter Self-Review of All Chapters

After you’ve finished revising your chapters, and before you send your documents to the Lead Author for final review, each author completes a Chapter Self-Review for each chapter they wrote. Do this last, because any revisions to content can introduce new issues to resolve.

Use the Chapter Self-Review list below to get your chapters ready to be used by students. We recommend making multiple passes through your work, doing one task at a time. For example, if you wrote two chapters, check all headers in both chapters at once, then add all markup at once, and so on.

  1. Headers
    1. Chapter title is H1; chapter sections are H2; chapter subsections are H3. Headers must go in order (example: H4 must not follow an H2).
    2. Remove stacked heads – back-to-back headings that do not have text between them. Add content, or delete one of the headings.
    3. Check that paragraphs and images in the text body aren’t accidentally marked as headers.
  2. Markup around sections of text that indicate Pressbooks formatting requests
    1. Use [box] [/box] around content that will go inside a blue box. Boxes must start with an H3 header and can include figures.
    2. Use [sidebar] [/sidebar] around content that will go inside a golden box. Sidebars are for short text that is independent of running text (e.g. ancillary, non-recurring, or emphasized content). Sidebars do not need a header and cannot include figures.
    3. Use [feature] [/feature] around content that will go inside a golden box in your online book, and will go into a full page with a shaded golden background in your print book. Features are for long text that is independent of running text. Features must start with an H3 header and can include figures.
    4. Use [epigraph] [/epigraph] for a short quote at the beginning of a chapter or section.
    5. Use [blockquote] [/blockquote] for quotations of over 40 words.
  3. Figures, including images, tables, and any other media
    1. Each figure has a figure caption below it.
    2. Figures are numbered in order.
    3. All figure captions start with the word “Figure” followed by the number, regardless of what type of media they are.
    4. All figures will default to full size. If you want a figure to be small, select the figure and add a comment that says “small.”
    5. Remove any titles above figures, and move all information about the figure into the figure caption.
  4. Images
    1. Images include alternative text descriptions in the alt text field and, if needed, long descriptions in the {Course #} Image Descriptions Folder.
    2. Images do not rely on color alone to convey information.
  5. Embedded Multimedia
    1. Videos have transcripts in the {Course #} Transcript Folder.
    2. All videos include edited audio captions of all speech content and relevant non-speech content.
    3. All videos with contextual visuals (graphs, charts, etc.) are described audibly in the video.
  6. Tables
    1. Tables include row and/or column headers.
    2. Tables are not wider than one header column + 4 body columns (all of our formats have a vertical orientation). Wide tables should be adapted to focus on only the most important information for students.
  7. Links
    1. The link anchor describes the destination of the link (not the word “here”).
    2. The link includes the destination format in square brackets. Avoid names of companies: Pressbook, Canvas, YouTube, etc. We use:
      1. Streaming Video
      2. Online PDF, JPG, PNG, etc.
      3. Download PDF, JPG, PNG, ZIP, etc.
      4. Website
      5. Podcast
      6. Google Doc, Google Sheet, Google Folder, etc.
  8. Licenses and Attributions
    1. There is an H3 for Licenses and Attributions at the end of each H2 section.
    2. Original content has an open license statement.
    3. Content from other sources used under an open license or under fair use is attributed using the Attribution Style Guide [Website].
  9. References
    1. There is an H2 for References at the end of each chapter.
    2. The reference list consistently follows the author team’s agreed-upon citation style.
    3. Each reference list entry corresponds to an in-text citation, and each in-text citation has a reference list entry.
    4. Each reference list entry is a single paragraph. Do not manually use the “enter” key and space bar to force a hanging indent paragraph style.
  10. Internal links to other chapters/sections in your book
    1. Highlight the text that you want linked and add a comment that starts with CROSSREF.
    2. To link to an entire chapter, just add the number of the chapter.
    3. To link to a chapter section, add the number of the chapter and the name of the section (this can be an H2 or H3).
  11. Unsupported elements
    1. Footnotes: if you’ve added footnotes, determine whether the information is essential and incorporate it into the text if so. If not, cut!

Pilot Manuscript Packet

The table below shows the full packet of documents that make up the manuscript you will hand in to the Project Manager at the end of this unit.

Figure Y1 10.3 Use this table to make sure that your packet is complete. The Lead Author will review all documents to make sure that the manuscript is ready for course pilots and external review.
Document Title Purpose
Chapter Docs Textbook content
{Course #} About This Book Defines the original author team’s goals, equity lens, and scope.
{Course #} Prelaunch Front and Back Matter Contains the book sections for students and future instructors that appear before and after the body of the text.
{Course #} Key Terms Glossary terms and definitions that align with learning objectives for each chapter.
{Course #} H5P Questions Formative assessments that align with learning objectives for each chapter and appear as interactive elements in the Pressbooks platform.
{Course #} Transcript Folder Collects documents following the {Title of Video} Transcript template.
{Course #} Image Descriptions Folder Collects long descriptions for complex images.

Message for Lead Authors for Full Manuscript Review

The to-do list below is designed to help you prioritize tasks to prepare a student-ready book for classroom use. You’ll use it during the last two weeks of Unit 10, after you have all the completed chapter drafts from your team.

Collaboration has been the name of the game up to this point, but now is the time to put your stamp of approval on the manuscript. Lead authors should review all work completed by contributing authors to ensure that these essential checkpoints have been met.

One of the best things you can do to finalize your manuscript is to schedule time to read your manuscript front to back. Your reading time for the manuscript is likely to be at a rate of 300 to 500 words per minute. Word count for each chapter can be found under the “tools” menu in Google Docs, allowing you to estimate the time it will take to complete your read-through.

As you read, look for these to-dos:

  1. Do not add new content (yes, this is a to-do!).
    1. If you find topics or sections that are incompletely developed, do not finish them now. Instead, move the content to your Parking Lot document to work on in Year 2.
    2. Likewise, if your read-through gives you ideas about new topics or sections that will support your curriculum learning outcomes, capture those ideas in your Parking Lot document and come back to them after this deadline.
  2. Make sure that Developmental Editor feedback is implemented in order of priority, if Contributing Authors left unresolved feedback.
    1. Address global issues. These issues are identified in the Developmental Editor’s feedback. This includes taking care of any to-dos that weren’t completed before chapters were handed off to you.
    2. Address margin comments. These comments often identify changes that require adding, cutting, or rewording/reorganizing something in the text.
    3. Resolve in-line suggestions. These edits are aimed at stylistic consistency, coherence, or grammatical structure. You can save time by accepting all suggestions automatically rather than reviewing them one by one.
    4. Move unresolved comments and suggestions to your Parking Lot document.
  3. Review, and check again.
    1. Review. With every change you make there’s a possibility of introducing a new error, so please be sure to re-read any edits you accepted to ensure the new addition blends seamlessly into the existing text.
    2. Check again. Before submitting your chapter docs, please run a spell check and grammar check; confirm that placeholder text is deleted; check every image for alt text; and scan for unresolved comments. Your documents should be completely cleaned up!

Unit Self-Check Questions

Licenses and Attributions for Finalizing Your Full Manuscript

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“Finalizing Your Full Manuscript” by Open Oregon Educational Resources is licensed under CC BY 4.0.

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“Message for Lead Authors for Full Manuscript Review” is adapted from OER Targeted Pathways Final MS Checklist by Chemeketa Press, licensed under CC BY-NC-SA 4.0.

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